Lizzy Tomlinson

Rookie (Dundee, Scotland.)

To My Rhyme. - Poem by Lizzy Tomlinson

My pen is running dry now,
The ink is fading fast,
I want to finish writing,
But I don't think it will last.

I'm in an awful quandary,
I don't know what I'll do.
If it happens before I'm finished,
'Cause I won't remember yo...


Comments about To My Rhyme. by Lizzy Tomlinson

  • Brian Dorn (5/31/2006 10:17:00 AM)


    Lizzy, I like the unfinished ending as the ink ran out, and how sometimes relationships end the same way... empty. Good write! !
    Brian
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  • (3/26/2006 8:10:00 AM)


    (; -) Nudge nudge.
    Danny.
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 26, 2006

Poem Edited: Sunday, March 26, 2006


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