Friday, September 17, 2021

To Put A Marriage On Hold (Villanelle) Comments

Rating: 5.0

My love, it was on a sunny early spring day
that you did call, on the phone and did hurt me
and fluttering outside a myriad of birds did play,
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Gert Strydom
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Nabakishore Dash 01 October 2021

A beautifully explained poem of love.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 September 2021

A poignant, insightful touching poem, 5 Stars full

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 September 2021

To put a marriage on hold is indeed devastating especially on the other party and his family. A poignant poem of love well expressed.

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Gert Strydom

Gert Strydom

Johannesburg, South Africa
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