To Save You. For M. Poem by Liza Sud

To Save You. For M.

Rating: 5.0

If in Haifa there is war and fires,
people evacuated, they say- it's arabs.
then in case of war - you are always welcome
to my open door, without secret entries.

Oh don't go to your family in Canada.
What awaits you there - is ugly reality.
Come to me - to your fair part - in Russia,
to sit on my roof higher than any passion!

I have two divans, but I'll take half-sofa,
it will be mine, second half - at your side.
The first time in life - I will not regret it -
I will feel the light, inconvenience fetters.

I will feel as if it was just my right side -
and the calm you'll bring - it will make us happy.
I know you want more - every soul's salvation.
Any evil door - conquers gravitation.

You said: it is war, I'm afraid to lose you.
Because you were - Rav, everyday to choose me.
so please call today. My skype -.
Tell me how you are, dear Michael Laitman.


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Если в Хайфе сейчас война и пожары,
и эвакуация, говорят - Арабы.
то на случай войны - моя дверь открыта
для тебя всегда, без паролей скрытых.

О, не уезжай ты к семье в Канаду.
Там уродство реальности ожидает.
Приезжай ко мне - часть тебя - в России,
чтоб сидеть на крышах страстей превыше!

У меня два дивана, но мы поделим
часть софы - моя, а вторая - где ты.
Первый в жизни раз - я не пожалею -
и увижу свет, кандалы презрею.

Я почувствую части правых линий,
ты вернешь покой - станем мы счастливей.
Ты мечтаешь о каждой души спасеньи.
Но любое зло - дверь к преодоленью.

Ты сказал: война. Я боюсь потери.
Ибо ты - мой Рав, каждый день у двери.
Позвони сейчас. Мой скайп -.
Расскажи, как ты, дорогой рав Лайтман.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 26 November 2016

What AN EFFORTLESS POEM, that is, it seems to be a self-contained whole that in produced in a second but there is so much emotion compressed in these lines. Emotion that was dormant inside you and suddenly coaleses in a fervent declaration. The only response of the other party is: I will believe everything you say, that way the two of you will own the future as you already own the present. (Of course, this is a poem and not reality. Of course. But... it is such a wonderful poem of total understanding between two people, or at least the invitation of the speaker to forge such a union.)

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M Asim Nehal 25 November 2016

A prayer of innocent to live peacefully....Excellent 10

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