Monday, April 14, 2008

To Touch The Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

To touch the heart of someone dear
though it might sometimes cause a tear
To fall or rest upon the cheek
Should be something all one should seek.
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Abdul Karim 05 January 2009

this is very great, I like it more.

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Yaseen Anwer 21 December 2008

Being a poet you must feel proud with this piece of work

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Aijaz Asif 27 November 2008

its a marvellous write with so deep thoughts and a very nice use of rhymes...i loved it and am unable to choose which line is best of all and it really touched my heart...bravo, bravo 10++++++ nd A++++++ for this beautiful write rgds asif

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Sarwar Chowdhury 23 November 2008

hey! Nice rhyme and rhythm! Lovely composition! 10++

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Anjali Sinha 17 November 2008

I am reading you over and over again you touched my heart too love anju

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Varun Batra 16 October 2008

And then the time it takes to grow A loving heart is very slow. For hearts expand as those who care Extend their love and let us share Oh these four lines are so deep I love your poem well written Thanks for sharing

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