Tolerance Poem by abhipsa panda

Tolerance

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When tolerance reaches saturation,
we beg before God for concession.
Growing troubles bring frustration,
and we lose our mental condition.

Why the destiny has chosen us?
We will bear it entire life in solus.
Can't it find someone else and focus,
dominance has made my every step cautious.

Lost in my world being silent,
uttering a word will award punishment.
Do we call this an adjustment?
Or this needs a decision prudent.

Sunday, October 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: tolerance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
ashny 07 August 2019

it was not a good poem

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 October 2018

Lost in my world being silent, uttering a word will award punishment. Do we call this an adjustment? Or this needs a decision prudent. Struggles, worries, thinking, trying to philosophize in given situations, trying to find a solution..... so much is in your poem. you are great. i am always astound with the word ending of the stanzas...... wow.. tony

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Abhipsa Panda 18 October 2018

Thank you so much Sir for giving time to read my poems and commenting on it...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 October 2018

A motivational piece of work! Liked the underlying philosophy of this beautiful poem!

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Abhipsa Panda 14 October 2018

Thank you Sir.... Everything has a saturation point..

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