Tom, Atom! Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

Tom, Atom!

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Waves of the sea!
This sea,
Wider and bigger! !
Streams;
Think before you act!
Because, any wrong decision you take can also affect your neighbour next door.

Line, Nile!
From the entrance of the harbour;
Why should i vote you into power when, you cannot control your own son to be a normal person?
When it is sunset in your land, it then means, sunrise in aother land.

Nile, mile!
Let it be a very nice news;
Like a treasure of edible fish,
But, the mirror of the terror is only with horror! !

Polo, loop, pool!
A simple person;
Hard to come by,
Because, the sun does not sleep.

The river,
The river of love;
Tom, atom!
Like the muse of a voilet star out there.

Wednesday, October 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: questions
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Liza Sudina 14 October 2015

Why should i vote you into power when, you cannot control your own son to be a normal person? - a good question! even in Bible a wiseman couldn/t control his kids! it is difficult and God demands it!

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Edward Kofi Louis

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Accra, GHANA
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