Tonights Dream Poem by Dwayne Bailey

Tonights Dream

Rating: 5.0


Tonight I dreamed a dream,
I was lost in a mighty gail;
My ship was torn to pieces,
I lost both my masts and sails
.
I knew my life was over,
surley at sea I would die;
To my family I was lost forever,
oh the tears that fell from my eyes.

So I knelt down on the deck,
as the waves crashed over the rails;
And began to say a little prayer,
Lord I know your word wont fail.

I'm asking you for some peace,
as I am about to die;
Please let my end be quick,
on me please keep your eye.

To my suprise as I arose,
the storm that quickly came,
Had disapered into the night,
my ship and I remained.

Then I woke up in a sweat,
covered from head to toe;
My heart was pounding like a hammer,
my mind racing to and fro.

Then I knelt and said thank you,
for reminding that you care;
Help me not to wait for a disaster,
to talk with you in prayer.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thad Wilk 25 May 2008

A powerful write Dwayne, very well executed and thought provoking! You don't have to wait for a disaster to talk to God, He will answer every prayer, no matter what He is always there! ! *10*! Best regards, Friend Thad

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Azriel Dreams 25 May 2008

G-d Bless Dwayne; stay strong my friend and have faith. Hold steadfast there are many storms in life and there are bays to make you a harbour in life. You never know what's around that next corner in life. You could be surprised. Life can mostly only get better with a smile and hope. I felt you, thanks Dwayne, it was strong, truth bound and emotionally delivered. Hope, faith, love and G-d. Azriel x

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