Too Cold Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

Too Cold

Rating: 5.0


As the first ray of the sun
Grazes the roof of my hut
I feel its warmth and come
Out to take a long walk but

Cool wind of morn sends
A shiver down my spine
Back I go to my hut and
Watch the high hills shine

Through the window and
Feel that it will be a day
Of cold and snow and its
Better inside I must stay

Tuesday, December 8, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: morning
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 08 December 2020

Cool wind of morn sends A shiver down my spine Back I go to my hut and Watch the high hills shine. Watching all the wonders of nature and forget the pain. very fine poem. tony

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Practicing Poetess 08 December 2020

Ah, that first ray of morning sun can fool you. Actually, the sun can shine brightest on the coldest days! A well-written poem.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 December 2020

if it snows at ur place wear woolen warm jackets and clothes here who ignore get HYPO THERMIA kids unknowningly we heard had died minus wow tc pal TAKP

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