Too Much Poem by Annie Janine

Too Much

Rating: 5.0


The worlds too much for me
the more she bleeds
the less she eats
she wants to die
this is why I cry

i try to help but
i do no good
she cuts too deep
like I knew she would

but i cant stop her
because im miles away
and i dont know if she listens
to a thing i say

so i sit here in self loathing
waiting for the day
when i can finally take
all of her pain away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Harrison 24 September 2009

The feeling really comes through in this poem. Great work, keep it up.

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Annie Janine

Annie Janine

Brooklyn, New York
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