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Too Young To Die

Please God don't take me yet
I am still Young.
Yes I am too young to die.
I have dreams to fulfill.
I hope to be a father of kids one day.
Please God help me to get rid of this
Disease.

You are my last resort no one else
Other than you, I have tried numerous
Doctors but no one can ever cure me.
My mother does not have money to
Take me to private hospitals and
Expensive doctors.

Here I am helpless, but I will never
Attempt suicide no matter what.
It is this disease that make me
Lonely for all my life.
It is this disease that make me
So angry all the time.

It is this disease that holds my life.
It is this disease that makes me
Feel so inferior.
It is this disease that makes me
To lose hope and patiency.

It is this disease that makes me lose
Confidence.
I always isolate my self because I don't
Even know whether this disease is
Contagious or not.

This disease is in my mouth maybe I
Will know it one day.
Please God only one favour if you
Can cure me this disease it will
Be better than drinking water.

Poem Submitted: Friday, September 12, 2008
Poem Edited: Friday, October 24, 2008

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  • Dipak AdhyaDipak Adhya (4/3/2018 1:47:00 AM)

    a well written verse. deep thought...

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  • Mel Vincent Basconcillo (4/21/2009 10:31:00 PM)

    u will live forever in ur poetry my friend..outstanding poem

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  • Jason Floyde (3/7/2009 11:49:00 AM)

    Very Good poem, tugs at the heartsrting for sure. Very well written. I was diagnosed with Cystic Fibrosis in May of last year so I know where you are coming from. I hope all is well and good luck in the future!

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  • Manonton Dalan (9/18/2008 11:06:00 AM)

    you are not going to die. you will be remembered. truthful expression.
    md

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  • Kris Smith (9/13/2008 3:02:00 AM)

    That is a very good poem my friend tugs at the heartstrings and sends out a good message to all your friends on ph thank you Chris 10

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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (9/13/2008 2:42:00 AM)

    O it is so touchy, so sad! It relates tear.10 for this wonderful compostion.

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