Friday, September 12, 2008

Too Young To Die Comments

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Please God don't take me yet
I am still Young.
Yes I am too young to die.
I have dreams to fulfill.
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Dipak Adhya 03 April 2018

a well written verse. deep thought...

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 21 April 2009

u will live forever in ur poetry my friend..outstanding poem

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Jason Floyde 07 March 2009

Very Good poem, tugs at the heartsrting for sure. Very well written. I was diagnosed with Cystic Fibrosis in May of last year so I know where you are coming from. I hope all is well and good luck in the future!

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Manonton Dalan 18 September 2008

you are not going to die. you will be remembered. truthful expression. md

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Kris Smith 13 September 2008

That is a very good poem my friend tugs at the heartstrings and sends out a good message to all your friends on ph thank you Chris 10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 13 September 2008

O it is so touchy, so sad! It relates tear.10 for this wonderful compostion.

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