Torn Asunder Poem by Joshua Fegley

Torn Asunder

Rating: 4.5


To say to her 'I love you' one day.
I think of what she might say.
To hold her so close, so near;
gently whispered in her ear.

To hold her with gentle hands,
giving into her demands.
I hope she will love me too.
To live a life together forever true.

This love she will not abide,
so she casts my love aside.
Wistful love only to discover;
a broken heart never to recover.

My heart dies inside of me
and the serenity ceases to be.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elizabeth Sheaffer 31 December 2006

I second Hazel. Very well-written. So moving...

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