Joshua Fegley

Rookie - 5 Points (Just another dying day... / I'm fading away)

I Am Fading Away - Poem by Joshua Fegley

As I stand,
feeling the rain;
flowing over me,
washing away my pain.

The wind blows cold,
my skin turns old.
With every passing day,
I am fading away.

The rain kisses my face,
feeling so cold;
reminiscent of the memories,
that I hold.

In an attentive gaze,
through a mental haze.
Just another dying day,
I am fading away.


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  • (1/22/2007 3:13:00 PM)

    Hey, that was a great poem. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/20/2007 5:55:00 AM)

    i like it
    great poem...
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  • (12/31/2006 10:08:00 PM)

    This reminds me of some of my earlier stuff... (Not that you can get much earlier at 16..) These days it's more morbid and depressing... I like the imagery in this one. Most of your poems have amazing imagery. I can actually see what you describe. Beautifully written. (Report)Reply

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  • (12/21/2006 12:06:00 PM)

    I really like this poem, Great writing! (Report)Reply

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  • (12/2/2006 4:54:00 AM)

    i really liked this poem, spiclly in the frist part when u said. as i stand feeling the rain flowing over me, washing away my pain.. i really liked it (Report)Reply

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  • (11/23/2006 6:38:00 PM)

    Invisibility only removes you from seen pain...Take Care of the unseen (Report)Reply

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  • (11/23/2006 8:39:00 AM)

    I can relate to this shit man, pretty good (Report)Reply

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  • (11/22/2006 9:24:00 AM)

    i like this poem... good work. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/21/2006 12:55:00 PM)

    Joshua,
    Awesome poem. I felt those days and you have captured them perfectly. Those are the days we wished we could die but motivate us to stay alive and make a legacy. Awesome! Lisa
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  • (10/20/2006 3:04:00 PM)

    As I read your poems I can picture mine for I write poems like yours, yours reminds me so much of mine, I love this poem, it's beautiful.

    Alisha
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  • (10/19/2006 9:37:00 AM)

    nice poem..

    Asma...
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 18, 2006

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 20, 2010


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