Transparent Waters Poem by Muhammad Shanazar

Transparent Waters

Rating: 5.0


Begin thoughts scrub the surface,
Remove rust, wash the sable spots
Of eyes, of heart and of dark mind;
But the diabolic coat a layer upon a layer,
Impede lights, make us blind,
Though we claim to be the men of wisdom,
Yet we move in the canyon of obscurity.

Standing upon the top of an alien hill,
I beheld a lush green gorge,
Merging with serpentine bends,
Down below into the countless mounds.
All humps rose with moderate heights;
Below to the left on the turn first,
A tall tree with comb like leaves,
And extending branches enchanted my soul.

Upward to the right behind the top,
An ocean of the subtle transparent waters,
With no crease, no ridges or dancing waves,
Extended, stretched beyond the sight,
Like a huge colourless glass affixed,
In the wooden frame lying prostrate.

Looking down through transparent waters,
On the other side I beheld beneath the sky blue,
And walked upon praying, with the body ethereal,
O! God,
“Impede access of Man to those e spheres,
Lest like world they should pollute them too.”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Uzma Jamil 20 November 2008

yes indeed a great work by a great poet. there r some who''remove rust, wash the sable spots''. i wish to see such work 4m ur side. truly uzma.

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Mary Gordley 31 January 2008

Muhammad, your reveal some worthy thoughts in this poem. I am in agreement with the sentiments expressed and those last two lines conclude it well.

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