john tiong chunghoo

Gold Star - 4,628 Points (Jan 21,1960 / Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia)

Travel Japan Haiku - The Stained Bedsheets - Poem by john tiong chunghoo

love hotel laundrette
every now and then lips red
splotches on sheet scream..deflowered

love hotel laundrette
now and then red splotches scream
from the bed sheet..deflowered

Comments about Travel Japan Haiku - The Stained Bedsheets by john tiong chunghoo

  • (2/1/2009 9:50:00 AM)

    If I was staying there I would take my own crisp Egyptian cotton sheets John! lol Or they could get better deter gents! lol Smiling at you, Tai (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 1, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, February 1, 2009

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