Steven Federle

Freshman - 605 Points (1951 / Cincinnati Ohio)

Travis Moonrise - Poem by Steven Federle

Over barren trees
the tattered moon
ascends, barely clearing
dark hills
pausing, unwilling
to fall back
into cold, delta fog,

like the lumbering C-5
rising through the gloom
on bright thunderbolts
to December's
bleeding moon.


Comments about Travis Moonrise by Steven Federle

  • (12/13/2011 2:43:00 AM)


    'like the lumbering C-5
    rising through the gloom
    on bright thunderbolts
    to December's
    bleeding moon.' very nice line! I have seen them lumber myself in Little Rock and they do just as you say...<><
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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 12, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2011


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