Tri Color Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Tri Color

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Tri color may be furled tomorrow in the sky
We raise our head and try
Look! It is our national flag
Freedom is there and in bag

Yes, we have made progress
Clean roads are their with smooth surface
Yet we need to strive hard and chase
All our dreams that were not realized in some cases

We look towards stable nation
Cordial atmosphere with strong relation
We are seen with high hope
Our progress is constant and non stop

We lack many things
As new nation we may miss certain things
Yet some lapses are not to be forgotten
The basket is certainly having few eggs as rotten

What do we reiterate on this Independence Day?
Look towards leadership and shut the eyes any way?
No we need to improve and warn leaders
You may face same grave as ours

Millions starve for the want of food
Our crop is bumper and good
We can feed domestic people
As we as help those who are in trouble

We need warehouses and not stadiums
We need to balance with equilibrium
Grain should not rot in open
The situation should not slip out of hand and turn

Let freedom be seen in truest form
Let national wealth remain at home
Foreign help is necessary and welcome
Yet neighborhood should prove troublesome

Raise head with honor and assert
We shall be second to none in desert
We shall come up with green belt and make revolution
Country may witness real progress with firm resolution

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 August 2012

Tri color may be furled tomorrow in the sky We raise our head and try Look! It is our national flag Freedom is there and in bag

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 August 2012

Belinda Hutcheson well written 7 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 August 2012

Matloob Bokhari great about a minute ago · Unlike · 1

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 August 2012

''We shall come up with green belt and make revolution Country may witness real progress with firm resolution'' - amazing idea

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 August 2012

Brad Smith Happy Independence Day to my friends overseas! !

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 August 2012

Brian Bigelow Remember studying it, it could have been better thought out but they were in a hurry to get something done. Sometimes its better when the politicians get nothing done. a few seconds ago ·

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 August 2012

Queeny Gona Hasmukh sir I wish the whole globe read this poem. Let us not repeat the mistakes of past 16 minutes ago via mobile · Like · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 August 2012

ichelle Marcak2 hours ago I like the concept... Comment +1 Good narration of Indian spirit

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 August 2012

Vinod Passy2 hours ago I particularly like the lines We need warehouses and not stadiums We need to balance with equilibrium Grain should not rot in open Good work by Mr. Hasmukh Mehta The situation should not slip out of hand and turn Let freedom be seen in truest form Let national wealth remain at home Comment +1 decent

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 August 2012

Elliott Knick2 hours ago political not really my thing but good write Comment +1 ok

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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