Troubled Times
When the day tires me to the last of my strength
Journey is miles away for the shores to reach
sailing boat is in the middle of storms
Tides are beyond my head
Sun is shining in the other part of world
Moon is also shrouded by darkened and thundering clouds
Oh God come with thy shine
Show me path to waft my sail
Oh master of my life give me strength
Could reach to the destination,
To accomplish your scripted role
Never leave me in lurch in midway of my life.
Beautiful poetic depiction and description of life. But your assessment of God as a puppeteer is not Biblical. I love that you seem to ask Him to show you His Way to go, lest we flounder and drown. Only He can save us. Very well done. Excellent. I enjoyed this.
I really liked it even though i'm not one who prays much. Good job. :)
Excellent depiction of life! As the veitable journey, which definitely wearies, sailing through troubled waters and nearly capsizing, taxed beyond your reason, the light obliterated, calling upon the Lord your Creator for wisdom and guidance to do His will....to know the way to go, and to bring you to the end, so very perfect! You expressed it beautifully. I quite like it!
What a beautiful and heartfelt prayer. God will never leave you in the lurch, he will test and see your inner strength. This prayer can be taken to heart. Fantastic words by the poet.10+
A beautiful prayer that anyone could use at anytime, because God always listens to prayer regardless of whether it is perfect or not. A very good and enjoyable poem by an excellent writer.
The poet pray to The Most Gracious God to save his soul in such humble way and hope for the best. Well written and sincere prayers will be heard by Him.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
what a lovely and inspirational prayer it is. really liked it. only God Almighty has the power to drag us out of the darkness and troubled time.