Trounced Rigidity Poem by Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Trounced Rigidity

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Compassionate touch
Aptly applied
Twists blunt and stiff
Slowly, but steadily, to
Vision de luxe;
Coats smoothness
Impinges no anguish!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 22 November 2018

Twisting life we can accept changes in life. You have beautifully penned this poem. Compassionate touch motivates mind. An interesting poem you have shared basing on perception...10

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 22 November 2018

Thank you Kumar for the comment.

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 May 2016

With the muse of love and life! Nice work.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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