Edward Kofi Louis

Gold Star - 483,872 Points (13th October 1961 / Accra, GHANA)

True Commitment - Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

I've got the rain of sulphur on Soldom and Gomorrah,
But do share your tender love with me;
For true commitment means doing it,
And like the bank and the river.
Offer your pitcher and do not urge me to leave you,
For obedience is better than sacrifice!
And like your horn full of oil towards my love.
True love is part of the risk of life!
And with your sweet love to care about;
But true commitment is all that is needed on this love.

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 9, 2010

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