Ben mcelfresh

Rookie (10-3-89 / Germany)

Trust - Poem by Ben mcelfresh

As i sit here alone tonight
My life is fading away
Though it’s not evident
My heart is slowly stopping.

I need you to know this
Maybe if someone cares,
Maybe i can be saved
Will you be that someone i need?

In my life love seems to be rare
Something left behind
My childhood knew of the realities of life
Why was i put through those things?

All i need is someone to guide me
Someone to love me
Someone to care
Just once more I’ll ask for these few things

Maybe this time I’ll receive them
Maybe this time someone will listen
Maybe they’ll hear my screams
Maybe this time pain won’t run free through my veins

Everyone sees the scars up my arm
The results of self-hate
Never trusting those around me
Maybe that’s because no one ever listened

Tonight I’ll ask for truth
Tonight I’ll ask for trust
Tonight I’ll ask for a friend
Tonight I’ll end my life.


Comments about Trust by Ben mcelfresh

  • Gini OQuinn (5/26/2007 10:24:00 AM)

    Hey Hey Hy Now No ending lives when I'm around (Report)Reply

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  • Anabel just AnabelAnabel just Anabel (3/8/2007 9:31:00 AM)

    Ben you are brilliant! ! ! I love this poem cause somehow it fits me as well, and if you let me I'll listen to you and I will care! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • So Much On Hand (3/5/2007 8:02:00 PM)

    That's a really good poem, and if it counts for anything I'll care...
    ~Trysta
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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 5, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, January 27, 2011


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