Try To See Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Try To See

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You can never hate
It is too late
You have loved me honestly
I quite understand really

I too miss same way as you do
It is fact and very much true
You were never away from memory
As I always prayed almighty

I felt you in entire body
As if you belonged to nobody
You were invading me in night dream
It was really causing concern

As I am firm believer
You may shiver
To know of my commitment
Make it not as sheer statement

Miss me and love more
Try to see through and explore
Write more affectionately
I shall rush to you immediately

I hear you patiently
And respond quietly
The signals travel to and fro
The gentle wind too helps and blows

Love is not meant to fool
It is divine tool
Not all can feel internally
If he or she lacks spiritually

Love badly
But never respond sadly
Reciprocate with equal enthusiasm
There lies real urge for humanism

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2014

You can never hate It is too late

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2014

It's okay Coale Bellamie30 minutes ago I like the concept, but the execution could be better. Sorry.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2014

nice Amara Vala30 minutes ago a bit long, but nice. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2014

welcome lisa and agam a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2014

welcome rohini daud a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2014

Oana Vasiliu and Katerina Riabova like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2014

That's really lovely.. Sumita Jetley18 minutes ago A message that goes long way. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2014

Nice rhythm Barbara Calahatian28 minutes ago I just love the wording. It was nicely done. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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