Turning Poem by Smoky Hoss

Turning

Rating: 5.0


There I stood,
an old brass doorknob in hand;
the moment, still as a dream
frozen.
Though the knob be turned
a thousand times over,
so many doors never open.
- Time is always so wary
of us travelers
suspended beyond ourselves
between the thresholds
of days we begin to become old,
and the last.
These portals open to wholesale debris,
worn memories of extraordinary things,
and astounding fortuities,
that once I am gone,
perhaps no one will recall.
- To lose everything
(here & now)
is to be reunited with all
that ever truly mattered.
I turn the knob.
Opening this last door.
I walk into Love.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A delicate blending of a dream and reality.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 23 August 2022

A fine and far-reaching sensitive piece, appreciated.

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Sandra Feldman 23 August 2022

A melancholic and quite beautiful poem. full of mixed feelings, past and present, Great nostalgia in remembering with love, as your faithful companion.

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M.J. Lemon 23 August 2022

We do seem to think that time always moves forward. But there is something very profound in the idea that it may in fact be a barrier, a locked door keeping our desires at bay. This goes to myfavourites.

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