Turtle Turtle Poem by Sierra Breeland

Turtle Turtle

Rating: 4.7



Turtle are slimy and slow
They live in a hard shell and glow
They walk across the street and they put on a show
Then it begins to snow
I really love turtles I just wanted you to know….




11-28-08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gail Hudson 29 November 2008

haha i love turtles too! i like this alot :) good job

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Aiswarya. T.anish 17 January 2009

Yeah! I like turtles too! they are beautiful creatures! !

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Hmmm turtles… slow indeed, however a bit faster than poor labour guys working very hard when at the same time when their girlfriends show what not to wear at the back of rich men cars… There’s a big difference between being slow, and responding to certain things at the most suitable moment... Good attempt on parrot rhymes – I’m sorry for such a delay with reviewing - 'breeland' indeed… I’ve got inspired and just couldn’t help not to share my own idea – here it goes: I am torn and confused, two so different guys between: sweating brick-man, or the prince on the top of flawless green…

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Hi Sierra you have some very nice first poems here, i don't think about the humble turtle much but your poem has made me appreciate them that much more, good imagination and great rhythem, keep up the good work :)

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Your right turtles are slow... But their cute too.. Great Job.. Love your best friend Krista

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Great JOB munchkin. I love you soooo much! Your Auntie April

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