Twilight Poem by Deep Mukherjee
Twilight
T ruth
W ipes out
I nfertile
L and of fantasy
I n a far distant maze
G od is busy in painting
H er colours of tears and raptures
T hen twinge twists in pinch of reality
Truth wipes away the infertile land of fantasy!
TANKA
Twilight creeps in
Crimson dreams yearn in the sky
Blue-azure-cyan
One last quest of salvation
Like birds returning to nest!
The first verse is acrostics. Very nice.Impressive usage of nice imagery.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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1/23/2025 10:31:00 PM # 1.0.0
Hallo Deep, I enjoyed this, but I would post the two poems extra, I`m not too sure that the mix is a good idea, they deserve to be looked at apart. I`m not too sure if the Tanka keeps to the syllable count of a standard Tanka, but I am a pragmatist who says, if it works it`s fine, and I like both of these poems. You might be interested to look at my writing. Regards, Leslie