Deep Mukherjee

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Twilight - Poem by Deep Mukherjee

T ruth
W ipes out
I nfertile
L and of fantasy
I n a far distant maze
G od is busy in painting
H er colours of tears and raptures
T hen twinge twists in pinch of reality

Truth wipes away the infertile land of fantasy!


Twilight creeps in
Crimson dreams yearn in the sky
One last quest of salvation
Like birds returning to nest!

Comments about Twilight by Deep Mukherjee

  • (8/19/2012 10:23:00 AM)

    Hallo Deep, I enjoyed this, but I would post the two poems extra, I`m not too sure that the mix is a good idea, they
    deserve to be looked at apart. I`m not too sure if the Tanka keeps to the syllable count of a standard Tanka, but
    I am a pragmatist who says, if it works it`s fine, and I like both of these poems. You might be interested to look
    at my writing. Regards, Leslie
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  • Freddy Ibarra (8/18/2012 8:46:00 PM)

    The structure is interesting. I love the imagery. (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (8/17/2012 10:31:00 AM)

    The first verse is acrostics. Very nice.Impressive usage of nice imagery. (Report) Reply

  • Betty Bolden (8/17/2012 5:54:00 AM)

    this is very nice. Good work. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 17, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, August 17, 2012

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