Deep Mukherjee

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Twilight - Poem by Deep Mukherjee

T ruth
W ipes out
I nfertile
L and of fantasy
I n a far distant maze
G od is busy in painting
H er colours of tears and raptures
T hen twinge twists in pinch of reality

Truth wipes away the infertile land of fantasy!



TANKA


Twilight creeps in
Crimson dreams yearn in the sky
Blue-azure-cyan
One last quest of salvation
Like birds returning to nest!


Comments about Twilight by Deep Mukherjee

  • (8/19/2012 10:23:00 AM)


    Hallo Deep, I enjoyed this, but I would post the two poems extra, I`m not too sure that the mix is a good idea, they
    deserve to be looked at apart. I`m not too sure if the Tanka keeps to the syllable count of a standard Tanka, but
    I am a pragmatist who says, if it works it`s fine, and I like both of these poems. You might be interested to look
    at my writing. Regards, Leslie
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  • Freddy Ibarra (8/18/2012 8:46:00 PM)


    The structure is interesting. I love the imagery. (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (8/17/2012 10:31:00 AM)


    The first verse is acrostics. Very nice.Impressive usage of nice imagery. (Report) Reply

  • Betty Bolden (8/17/2012 5:54:00 AM)


    this is very nice. Good work. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 17, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, August 17, 2012


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