Oneday in my dream
I came across a broken-wing bird
I silently asked 'Can you see me? '
With agony in eyes she screamed;
'I can see a pain-ful world'! !
Oneday in my dream
I came across a hungry lion
I fearfully asked 'Can you see me? '
With violence in his eyes he screamed;
'I can see the food which keeps me on'! !
Oneday in my dream
I came across an encaged rabbit
I politely asked 'Can you see me? '
With disgust it replied;
'I see slavery, deception and deceit'! !
Oneday in my dream
I came across a hunted deer
I frightfully asked 'Can you see me? '
Replied as it ran away;
'I see terror and fear'! !
Then oneday in my dream
I came across a smiling man
With despair I asked the same;
His smile banished; was it so lame! !
Without a reply the creature ran! ! !
Abandoned by everyone-
Dreams sank in deep water
To taste the voidness
Of this endless sea of despair! ! ! ! !
Very amazing. :) I really like this. It's has very good expression.: D
@Ahmed Khaled; sir; as i have already stated; this poem is a result of the inspiration i got from your poetry......i feel it's quiet an achievement that you have acknowledged it! ! ! !
And thanks to everybody who have appreciated my work! ! ! ! ! ! a big thanks from the core of my heart! ! ! !
Nice and different theme...nobody is bereft of the sorrows while living..
thats a sea of despair indeed to see the world so full of people yet every where there is lonliness and a void darkness engulfing...............poignant
A very odd way of explaining it but we feel your pain great poem
woah. did you really have these dreams. it is also good 10
You are an exceptional poet Deep: -) 'tis an honour to have read your lines
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this is amazing expression and i commend u for that.... cuz generations can talk and say stuff and then u can easily believe what others think about you but i think its even more important to know urself and what u believe sometimes is all that matters.dont let people, things determine who u are or r gonna be... sometimes in this world u have to fight hard for the good things.