A Puzzle Within A Puzzle Poem by Deep Mukherjee
A Puzzle Within A Puzzle
Days diminish in the wrath of night;
A new day is born after night ceases
A puzzle solved within a puzzle
Ripped into broken pieces!
An empty field, stars above
Stars die, blinding skies;
But the spilled silver of moon
Voices buzzed in her spiral eyes!
Pieces put together one by one
The puzzle seems complete to be;
Only to see if my fate is
Playing a puzzle with me!
Sound obscured and senses reversed
The moon shook and curled
Idle mind and severed soul
An empty puzzle in an empty world!
Bridges broke; Rivers burst
New cells grow in place of the old;
A new puzzle ready to be solved
Within a puzzle yet to unfold........
TANKA
Time like grains of sand
Or heralds of eternity
Webs of deception
A spider trapped in own webs
Puzzle within a puzzle! ! ! ! !
Sound obscured and senses reversed The moon shook and curled Idle mind and severed soul An empty puzzle in an empty world! My favorite line.... I absoluetly love this poem its soo deep. Well written
Title is too close to Poe's A Dream Within a Dream, stop copy writing.
ma'am i appreciate your comment; but with the little knowledge i can say that while writing this poem; the idea of 'a dream within a dream' never came up to your mind; so you are wrong in this aspect! ! ! it may be true you didn't like the content though! ! i take that as a fault and will try to rectify it! !
This is such a great insight into how mindful you are! A smart write and penned mindfully.Well done! ! ! !
yeah quiet true but sometime the puzzle are really dificult.i appreciate it.
a puzzle of life to be solved at every step...........its the way u solve that makes a different person of each...........wonderfully put forth.
Yes, it's true that there are many mysteries, or puzzles, of life to think about :)
well life i the great puzzle in life and god is the one with the directions follow him and im pretty sure you'll find the answers to your questions.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/2/2024 5:25:45 AM # 1.0.0
I really enjoyed reading this poem. Its really deep. Its obscure yet clear. Very good!