Tuesday, November 4, 2014

Twilight Heaven (An Antumn Poem) Comments

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Sombre tempests, seep with bonfire billows
In the charcoal wraith aromas, emanating autumn ‘sleeve
And everywhere the air is wrinkled and bitter
With summers reciprocity turning to winters prologue Elegies
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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 November 2014

Twilight heaven is an excellent poem shared that touches heart unlimitedly. Very fine work Kevin. Keep on writing. May God bless you.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 05 November 2014

Always admirable is yor diction, how u employd fulcrum, reciprocity, ennui, wow. U paintd autumn in a poetic way and dis time the poem's winsome in imagery. Kudos fav poet.

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Valsa George 04 November 2014

Autumn is a beautiful season with leaves of changing hues, a mild sun and chilly air! I like your expression... 'twilight heaven'! Every thing is sombre and as one walks along country pathways, one can enjoy the showers of leaves of yellow, orange and purple like the dropping of confetti! Enjoyed this autumn scene, so vividly portrayed!

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 04 November 2014

As I walk on a laurel trial and the slivery sky plummets the fervent blue. Beautifully presented Autumn poem. Excellent writing. Keep on writing. May God bless you.

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