elysabeth faslund

Rookie (11/23/49 / Thibodaux. Louisiana)

.................Twilight Storm - Poem by elysabeth faslund

Rain blending tin roof
Pitter patter...
Rain scooping pocks,
Bayou moves...

Thunder canyoning clouds'
Full Moon...
Thunder throws sky
To Earth...

Lightning chants screeches'
Ritual trance...
Lightning feasts bones
Of houses...

Wind breathless in branches'
Headstones..
Wind hiding plans...
Limp trees.

Storm outruns itself...
VHF silent.
Twilight edges webs
Of light...

Silence.


Comments about .................Twilight Storm by elysabeth faslund

  • Ted Sheridan (10/14/2008 8:38:00 AM)

    Love the poem...I can't wait for silence when I don't hear the voice of Obama every five seconds.... (Report)Reply

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  • Karima Astrid PKarima Astrid P (10/14/2008 8:24:00 AM)

    a very nice poetry indeed... (Report)Reply

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  • Paolo Giuseppe MazzarelloPaolo Giuseppe Mazzarello (10/14/2008 8:21:00 AM)

    This poem and nature are the same thing. It often should be like this. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 14, 2008



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