Brandi Guthrie

Rookie (3-9-76 / California)

Twisted - Poem by Brandi Guthrie

No one else`s eyes get me lit.
I swoon, melt and quite forget,
To blink, swallow, stand or sit.
I`m twisted up for you.

Something in the air you breathe
Can liberate and set me free,
Can drive in me this primal need.
To twist me up for you.

I shall not take a second chance
To surrender to another glance
And sink into a mindless trance.
Where I twist inside for you.


Comments about Twisted by Brandi Guthrie

  • (6/12/2010 11:01:00 AM)


    LOve makes us do funny things, , excuse pun. I loved your write. Love makes us go all gooy at times.; D (Report) Reply

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  • James Harding (5/21/2010 11:01:00 AM)


    hell yea... love ur style for this one 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Kimberly Hilliker (5/6/2010 8:42:00 PM)


    This is a great poem. I enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 6, 2010



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