Two Lost Drones Poem by Doris Cornago

Two Lost Drones

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As we did the other morning and many mornings
Nodding our heads, despairing over work but
Finding time to intersect at a crossroad
Your hand in mine, the other holding
The line so they do not get
Entangled with our
Legs, watch
The
Sunrise
Looming above
Our heads, in separate
Beds, necks aching fomenting
Commenting on fairy tales woven in
Rhymes, add more lime, you're so sublime
Falling asleep as we drift closer, like two lost drones

Two Lost Drones
Tuesday, July 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: imagination,rendezvous,timeless,fairy tale
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
As they say, time is a gift unequaled by any other gift because it is something that cannot be taken back when given. So, when someone gives me quality time, I know that this person is worthy of being the center of my attention. Time actually stops - or is it squandered? - when I am with this person. I can go anywhere, do anything with him. There is no limit to what we can do or be. We are meeting in our minds - our rendezvous is the space and time we share. :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Doris Cornago 12 July 2017

Middle English, to apply a warm substance to, from Late Latin fomentare, from Latin fomentum compress, from fovēre to heat, soothe; akin to Lithuanian degti to burn, Sanskrit dahati it burns. This word suddenly pops up in the middle of my musing about how poetry comes up in the middle of a conversation. I think the burning hands typing or the fingers texting have the same effect as applying heat to stir up some kind of a reaction - thus, fomenting. I do not give a word to confound or obtruct - but rather to target or close in to the most accurate emotion. :)

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Doris Cornago 11 July 2017

Sometimes, we need to explain what we meant and not mislead the reader that we do not care at all that he is appreciating how we soar above his head. We do care, even if we have poetic license. I am delighted to be seen when flying but ecstatic when a kindred spirit joins me in my flight. :)

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