Two Old Lads Poem by Francie Lynch

Two Old Lads

Rating: 5.0


This is the last summer.
Two lads of thirteen sauntered past;
One in barefoot with a backpack;
One in khaki shorts, with shoes and black socks
Over bloated calves.
One athletic, lean and gearing;
One more leaning towards academia.
Both waiting to enter high school.

They met in JK. I know their friendship well.
They slept on their towels, in their tents,
At each other's house on weekends.
They served together, lived as one;
Their mothers loved them as sons.
That's how close they'd become.
Their worlds will change,
Once this season's done.

One will be the talk of his circle,
The other, the talk of his;
But there's a Venn where the rings entwined
Before they turned thirteen.
Their hybrid youth,
Their cloned friendship,
Their memories there are mined.

Years ahead,
Around fires and bells,
Or just languishing on a porch;
They'll dig up those old friendship moments
Of the other when they were young.
Buried treasures relived in days of leisure,
But without the other one.

Wednesday, July 17, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: aging,friendship,memories,old memory,school days
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It happens all the time. Just ask me.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 17 July 2019

A beautifully envisioned story of 2 lads of around 13 and their thick friendship and how they would discuss it in old age, alone, while travelling down the memory lanes. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Francie Lynch

Francie Lynch

Monaghan, Ireland
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