Thursday, October 14, 2010

Unborn Son Comments

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Flickered souls and eyes are gazing
Peering at the unborn son, behold
The things that demote a man
To begging with his knees upon the floor:
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Christopher's Dead
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Amy Marie 03 April 2011

The repitition of the part of the part about the unborn son is catchy :) I like the way that feelings are expressed in this poem. Keep writing!

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Christopher's Dead

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