fountain sprinkles, wonderful cooled fog, touches
my emotion of contentment, a magic that maybe now
and then a beginning of an end, torching my feeling
of burning incense longing of you
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walk with me, to the corridor and feel my life;
like seeing the past returning each journey with you
and believing the sun has gone down to the lingering
home of a beautiful sunset
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I loved this stanza most, the simplicity it has plus the great imagery you have built using fine metaphors made it outstanding...The poem will fit in to the song to LOVE YOU MORE.........10++++
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walk with me, to the corridor and feel my life; like seeing the past returning each journey with you and believing the sun has gone down to the lingering home of a beautiful sunset ------ I loved this stanza most, the simplicity it has plus the great imagery you have built using fine metaphors made it outstanding...The poem will fit in to the song to LOVE YOU MORE.........10++++