Uncle Kim Poem by Elisabeth Wingle

Uncle Kim

Rating: 5.0


I received a call from my uncle
His problem was with a carbuncle
I said 'Uncle Gee whiz,
I don't know what that is! .
Is it anything like a turnbuckle? '

Wednesday, January 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: humor,limerick
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Well, Kim Barney I have accepted your challenge, not an easy rhyme. I guess I should be grateful that the problem wasn't an orange! Nice to meet you!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 09 October 2016

yes, close, but no cigar! why didn't you just use turnbunkle? who would know the difference? yes, orange is a read toughy! ! today i read and commented on: The Boy Who Laughed At Santa Claus by Tan Pratonixff.................he used benison to rhyme with venison. i'd never heard of benison! maybe because i lack religion? bri :) and poem is not easy to rhyme. about the best i've been able to come up with is something like show 'em.

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