..Uncontrolled Revelation.. Poem by Lorena Lalen Cruz

..Uncontrolled Revelation..



Complications..
Running through my veins
Oh no! !
Thy heart can't endure this pain

...Sigh...

Speak once, just a little
Unleash some covered words
Scream... Shriek! !
The things that should be heard

...Urghh! ! !

Yes.. Unveil..
Pour the storm of the rain
Empty the cup
The insanity that is contained

Ahhhhhh! ! ! ! Ahhhhh! ! ! !
(tears fell.. voice vanishing)

Wait! !
Controlling I can not
Spilling everything
Oh no! ! I said what? !

(PAUSE)

no.. No! . NO! !
Too much words spoken!
Too painful, much truth
Too much to more than I can..

Stoooppp! ! !

Oh no! !
Down to my knees I went
Struggling... Suffocating...
Revealing left me bent

End this! ! ! ! !

Oh death, I beg you
I knock on your door
Revelation was uncontrolled
Thy heart can't take no more

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nashy Lamen 23 September 2009

Woah, , . Knock on death... different style though.... keep writing.. :)

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Julia Pascual 13 September 2009

woah... i liked the way you put your climax... new style... keep on writing...

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