Uncountable Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Uncountable

Rating: 5.0

War offers nothing
but leaves
spilt blood
torn flesh
the bereaved,
in numbers
uncountable.

Saturday, June 15, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: bereavement,death,leaves,numbers,war
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 25 June 2024

You have unveiled the horrors of the war with brevity and depth. In just a few words, you have told the readers that war is unnecessary and outrageous. Kudos!

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Thank you, Nosheen. It is a great pleasure to understand that you are at the same wavelength as I am, when we speak of wars

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Nosheen Irfan made a comment on a poem titled Uncountable. A succinct gem of a piece. Thought-provoking and profound. ..."" Thank you Nosheen. You have always been kind to me. Obliged

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Amelie Ison 15 June 2024

Couldn't have put it better myself. Well done,

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Thank you, Dear Poet. For the best comment on my poem

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War causes unfathomable suffering to common man. The only beneficiaries of war are political leaders and arms traders

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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