07 A Cloud In The Silver Lining Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

07 A Cloud In The Silver Lining

Rating: 5.0


When you see a silver lining in the sky
just look for the dark cloud
that it encircles, ready to break
into a thunderous shower.

Weeps itself into nothingness!

Cloud that dissolves into thin air
But would flaunt a happy smile
A rainbow of smiles
hidden behind a gust of tears.

Wednesday, May 3, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: smile,rainbow,cloud
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by poem 'Pain' by Nayanika Dey.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajitha K.S. Ayyappan 10 November 2024

Beautifully penned poem. I loved the closing stanza. Inspiring!

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Thank you, Rajitha. From the bottom of my hearts

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C. Muralidara Kannan 17 March 2024

What a ray of hope after a showery sweep!

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Thank you dear poet. Ever grateful

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Tiana Isaac 07 July 2023

Such a beautiful poem.

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Thank you. It gives me pleasure to see that you enjoyed the poem

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Chinedu Dike 25 April 2023

Lovely poem with vivid imagery. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for this masterful creation, my friend. Remain enriched.

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It gives me immense pleasure to receive such great comments from you, poet Mr Dike

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 March 2023

A beautiful poem adorned with superb imagery and stunning poetic expressions. The closure lines are very inspiring. Top marks!

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I am happy to read your words of appreciation. Obliged.

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