"Uncover" *inspired By Zara Larson* Poem by Ally Odeen

"Uncover" *inspired By Zara Larson*

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Secrets, secrets, hidden in these walls,
I've put up to protect myself... but now they fall.

Nobody sees, nobody knows, the secrets they can't be exposed,
They must stay hidden, trapped, unexposed, enclosed!

The fear is burning and building inside,
All of my emotions glide and collide.

One substance can take it all away, but is it really gone, I mean how long does it stay?

Pressure from family and friends to do great,
But what if I can't... I'm just a worthless mistake!

The thoughts they're so loud I cannot think,
I take a drink and another... they slowly start to sink.

I know the feeling 'aint gonna' last but I don't care,
I can't handle everything that even got me there.

Everyone Sees, everyone knows, my secrets are somewhat exposed,
I guess I couldn't keep them forever enclosed...

Tuesday, January 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alexis Odeen 24 January 2018

Thank you everyone for your comments! I will be posting part two, to this poem a little later tonight. :)

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Chinedu Dike 24 January 2018

An insightful piece of poetry well articulated and nicely penned in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing Zara.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 January 2018

Ally, such great write👍👍👍

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Jazib Kamalvi 24 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Ally. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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