Under Cluessness Poem by Alex Tabbert

Under Cluessness



Life begins once again
Nothing to mend and bend
Yours words now mean nothing to me
Cluessless you must be
You'll never see the problems within thee

Find your self benift the soil
Blood had spelt all over like oil
My heart burns like a red hot coil
But you seast to actually know
That the love for you is hard to show

To break me down
The words you use, so silly like a clown
Music that keeps me alive in only just sound
For you to finially see
You really must know me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ellias Anderson Jr. 10 September 2012

well, this poem has lot to say about and it also has lots of things to talk about. well, the feeling of a lover, (perhaps a person who is been betrayed! !) is so shark and deep. it's like a twirly water. i mean the feeling of a betrayed lover. it will sink everybody inside it's self. the thing you have done here, you have sank a person in your words. it's good to know ourselves at first, then talk about other people and their problems. Your poem is great, but i justify to see it more brighter. well done.

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Saadat Tahir 04 September 2012

Life begins once again Nothing to mend and bend nice

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Joseph Poewhit 12 June 2012

Love is more than skin deep

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