Friday, September 18, 2009

Under The Rainbow Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the moment the shutter opens
the tragic mask stands out;
though maybe it's only for me:
it’s the one that catches my eye,
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Byepolar Bayer
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Naila Rais 31 March 2018

A nice imagination of haunting.... Well penned.... Deserves 10 +++ Naila

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Marieta Maglas 18 November 2009

the tragic mask stands out nice meditative poem 10

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Callie Carroll 26 September 2009

Ahhh, a night for haunting images, 'the shutter opened' and 'a shadowed window.' The gate may have been bolted, but you have been 'graced' with words.

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