Underneath Here Poem by Mariarosalia Arico

Underneath Here

Rating: 5.0


Streams and shades underneath here
they wash away my tears
faint and fading arrive to my ears
the sounds of the world up here
strange winged creatures surround me
they caress, murmur and soothe
passions melt into something else
they don't hurt and bite and scratch
moves are slow and laughters deaf
vowels and consonants dance together
in a sensual knot they love each other
breathes and sighs are made of powder
this is the reign of thought
underneath here nothing will hurt

Friday, October 20, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: imagery
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
There's a scene in Romance and Cigarettes in which he breaks up with her.
She imagines that he throws her into the water and so she finds herself diving into the water while she sings: under here you just take my breath away, under here the water flows over my head, I can hear the little fishes...

There's a scene in Romance and Cigarettes in which he breaks up with her.
She imagines that he throws her into the water and so she finds herself diving into the water while she sings: under here you just take my breath away, under here the water flows over my head, I can hear the little fishes...

There's a scene in Romance and Cigarettes in which he breaks up with her.
She imagines that he throws her into the water and so she finds herself diving into the water while she sings: under here you just take my breath away, under here the water flows over my head, I can hear the little fishes...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 22 June 2018

Well conceived and elegantly brought forth with insight. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Mariarosalia.

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Abdul Basit 20 October 2017

superb start.keep up the creativity and innovation.you may like to read my poem i rise and more

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Mariarosalia Aricò 23 October 2017

Thank you very much. I'm glad that emotions flow from my words. I'll read your poem.

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Mariarosalia. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Mariarosalia Aricò 23 October 2017

Thank you very much! I'll go and read your poem.

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