Konjit Berhane

Rookie (SePTeMBer,18 1983 DEath i Believe i am ImMorTal / a S M a R a)

Unemployed - Poem by Konjit Berhane

Bored and unemployed in my

Bed

My left hand used as a pillow under my

Head

My expensive Rolex watch clicking

Second after second

Making its perfect loud sound sharp as a

Blade

But me unmoved, conscious and drunk my eyes

Red

Just want to cease life, want my heart (batteries)

Dead
16 September,2005


Comments about Unemployed by Konjit Berhane

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (8/30/2008 10:46:00 AM)


    It's a nice composition when 'bored and unemployed' in bed. I enjoyed this piece. (Report) Reply

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  • (1/19/2006 6:35:00 AM)


    Nice! You got excellent rythmn with this, I agree though - don't let your batteries run out yet! ! Moyax (Report) Reply

  • (11/18/2005 11:46:00 AM)


    Konjit,

    Structure: flawless. Sentiment: pessimistic. Work: outstanding.


    With respect,

    Denis Joe (being brief for once)
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  • (10/21/2005 6:13:00 AM)


    Way to go gurl. This is a cool poem. Don't stop your batteries yet though :) (Report) Reply

  • (10/19/2005 11:18:00 AM)


    This is a good poem, reads well. I like it. Congrats.! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 19, 2005



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