Vishal Sharma

Gold Star - 5,400 Points (India)

Unexplored Pains - Poem by Vishal Sharma

the fish of my desires is struggling deep inside my salty lake of broken memories
and the shark of her thoughts roaming all around to get pleasure in bathing inside my tears
hope i get out of this unexplored sea of my pains that i have created by myself.

Topic(s) of this poem: pain

Form: Acrostic


Comments about Unexplored Pains by Vishal Sharma

  • Hazel Durham (11/3/2015 2:25:00 AM)


    The pain of losing love is written with great imagination and the hunger of getting rid of the hurt that burns inside your heart and soul!
    Original and great write!
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 27, 2015



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