Unfitting For Him Poem by Naveed Akram

Unfitting For Him

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Unfitting for a man, obligations are prominent,
But unfitting for a man, since a woman is absent.

Lucky men have such awareness, forever in consideration,
So luck is the case of this blush, this case of relief.

I knew a dying man, he strove to be joining to praises,
But the fortune was a reading of a book in exile.

The extant words tenderly persuaded us tonight,
Women of the labours and pains suffered from consideration.

I saw a lucky woman in surprise from the necessary pain,
This pain swallowed her whole, with sheer love to the side.

Despite my eye, I caught the losing of the captives,
These women of enemies, these fighting frozen dilemmas.

I have the lucky pen, words in the pen, those words are
Blessed by the luck of painful people in their finality.

Monday, January 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: awareness,enemies,woman,women,words
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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 January 2016

Lucky men have such awareness, forever in consideration, ...Very wise and interesting composition shared on.10

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Naveed Akram

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