Unfitting For Him Poem by Naveed Akram

Unfitting For Him

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Unfitting for a man, obligations are prominent,
But unfitting for a man, since a woman is absent.

Lucky men have such awareness, forever in consideration,
So luck is the case of this blush, this case of relief.

I knew a dying man, he strove to be joining to praises,
But the fortune was a reading of a book in exile.

The extant words tenderly persuaded us tonight,
Women of the labours and pains suffered from consideration.

I saw a lucky woman in surprise from the necessary pain,
This pain swallowed her whole, with sheer love to the side.

Despite my eye, I caught the losing of the captives,
These women of enemies, these fighting frozen dilemmas.

I have the lucky pen, words in the pen, those words are
Blessed by the luck of painful people in their finality.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 11 January 2016

Lucky men have such awareness, forever in consideration, ...Very wise and interesting composition shared on.10

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Naveed Akram

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