Naveed Akram

Gold Star - 20,325 Points (15 December 1973 / London, England)

Unfitting For Him - Poem by Naveed Akram

Unfitting for a man, obligations are prominent,
But unfitting for a man, since a woman is absent.

Lucky men have such awareness, forever in consideration,
So luck is the case of this blush, this case of relief.

I knew a dying man, he strove to be joining to praises,
But the fortune was a reading of a book in exile.

The extant words tenderly persuaded us tonight,
Women of the labours and pains suffered from consideration.

I saw a lucky woman in surprise from the necessary pain,
This pain swallowed her whole, with sheer love to the side.

Despite my eye, I caught the losing of the captives,
These women of enemies, these fighting frozen dilemmas.

I have the lucky pen, words in the pen, those words are
Blessed by the luck of painful people in their finality.

Topic(s) of this poem: man

Form: Free Verse


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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (1/11/2016 6:28:00 PM)


    Lucky men have such awareness, forever in consideration, ...Very wise and interesting composition shared on.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 11, 2016



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