Unheard Cries Poem by Lia Stroud

Unheard Cries

Rating: 5.0


She sits alone with her tears at night no one hears her cries,
She sits alone in darkness without a fright,
As the smell of blood stings her nose,
But she knows that no one is there to even care,
She touches her wrist and it stings from cutting,
She gives one last sob before rasing the knife stained with her blood,
She thruts it into her side and gives a quite sigh,
If only someone had heard her cries

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Quin Faas 09 October 2009

Again Julia you have a way with your words. You certainly know how to move emotion...it turned my moments while reading....

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no name - 05 October 2009

I like the message you are trying to give. Try putting this into Stanzas. I think it would give more emotion to it if you did that. Besides that, real nice job.

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