Forgoten Poem by Lia Stroud

Forgoten

Rating: 3.4


Do you see the girl in the background,
The one in the corner, with her hair in her face,
No you do not for she is invisable to your eyes,
You don't see the forgoten one,
But the forgoten ones see you,
And I see you but you don't see me,
Do you know why,
Because I am the girl in the corner,
The girl you have pushed away from your world,
I am forgoten

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
The Lost.. 09 October 2009

this is too short but powerfull and wonderfull too...

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Dog Trainer ............ 09 October 2009

Great nothing like it.5.3

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Quin Faas 09 October 2009

Julia, This were simple lines but powerful, the feeling became while reading this piece... and i think we all feel forgotten at some time or another...for me, at times, it's felt good to be forgotten.. thanks for sharing your work

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