Unlikely Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Unlikely

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Even if rebirth is unlikely
It makes one to wonder happily
If that becomes assured reality
It may make different quality

Problem may arise
With much to surprise
If present birth was not utilized to its best
What purpose it may serve with rebirth test!

Fancy ideas and human wishes have no end
It has its own brand or trend
Someone may want to be free bird
Someone may try to be disciple of lord

Yes it can be helpful if peace music is played on
The heart of millions can be easily won
If the entire period is to be spent for people
I hope no more troubles may be left for struggle

Such people do have chance
Almighty may also grant request at once
We hear many rebirth stories
Even though its exactness certainly varies

It speaks of healthy mind
With truthfulness and purity of some kind
Not all people dream of happy world
The dream of trouble less world must be told

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 February 2014

Even if rebirth is unlikely It makes one to wonder happily

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 February 2014

cool youssou cissé5 minutes ago just a little long for my taste.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 February 2014

The world... Taylor Kirby5 minutes ago Very nice and I agree, kudos :) Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 February 2014

Hasmukh Latrice Young5 minutes ago I really like this poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 February 2014

prasad bolimeru nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 February 2014

.... LEAVE ME.. What purpose it may serve with rebirth test!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 February 2014

catherine lajul Interesting!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 February 2014

Reliving Adebimpe Alo35 minutes ago We sometimes look over our lives and wish we had done something different. If only we could be reborn. Nice poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 February 2014

Dream a little dream for me ED M4 minutes ago GREAT POEM Comment 0

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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