ana khan

Unseen Entity Drives My Fate - Poem by ana khan

indulged in your commands...
not knowing any of my demands.
heart perplexed, desires wrecked, games unplanned.
my tears always come out of your shore...
my hairs always scatter in your storm.
i am a slave of your sparks...
not knowing any of your grafts.
all my fate goes into hands of unknown fears.
all my pain goes into lust of wildered tears.
they throw you in an ocean of spears...
not knowing any of your real heirs.

Topic(s) of this poem: spiritual

Form: Found Poem

Comments about Unseen Entity Drives My Fate by ana khan

  • Chinedu Dike (6/23/2015 12:55:00 PM)

    Beautifully articulated piece of poetry insightfully penned with conviction. A depressed mind in a state of chaos well depicted in the poem. One feels the way you have portrayed in the piece especially at ones lowest ebb. A lovely well encapsulated poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (3/31/2015 5:09:00 AM)

    Liked this philosophic poem..............................10 (Report) Reply

  • S.zaynab Kamoonpuri (3/28/2015 2:45:00 PM)

    Woah a sublime poem in lyrical tones of detection expressed in a poetic wry wistful way. U write in excellent literary style of poetry. Pls do review my latest poem called mother natures.... (Report) Reply

    (3/29/2015 9:11:00 AM)

    thnx.... i shall be writing more stuff very soon

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 28, 2015

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