indulged in your commands...
not knowing any of my demands.
heart perplexed, desires wrecked, games unplanned.
my tears always come out of your shore...
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Woah a sublime poem in lyrical tones of detection expressed in a poetic wry wistful way. U write in excellent literary style of poetry. Pls do review my latest poem called mother natures....
Beautifully articulated piece of poetry insightfully penned with conviction. A depressed mind in a state of chaos well depicted in the poem. One feels the way you have portrayed in the piece especially at ones lowest ebb. A lovely well encapsulated poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.